Milaita

Oops, I guess I forgot a word. :/

I like it :) a lot. Love the details. That is all I have to say, as I'm still in shock from reading that, and watching this really weird video.

Pretty funny, and a good choice of words. Nice rhythm, and lots of rhyming. Good job, keep working!

It is nice and lovely, but I too, wish to know the moral and motive. Otherwise, this could become something great. It has a lot of potential.

It all makes sense to me, but for you, I guess it does not. So, I shall explain! My favorite thing to do. :) Ok, for the running from the ...

So far, I believe this is quite nice. Keep writing, this could go far. :) It is well written, might I add.

Nice, just nice! I like this, keep going!!

Because she was chosen, I guess. She is trying to run away from the truth at first, and decides to face her fears after she realizes it isn't worth it. ...

I thought this was nice, and the rhyming was good, in contrast to my non-rhyming lines I come up with. I do hope you will keep writing pieces like this. ...

It may have been short, I agree, but, the shortest novels and stories are often some of the best. Pieces like these should be appreciated and loved. They are very ...

Wow, this is good. I like the whole "I'll put you in a trance to get what I need." thing. That's so fun! I wish I could do that to ...

It's so pretty. Though the awkward rhyme scheme is a bit strange. :/ But I do like it a lot.

Thanks for your feedback. :/ I don't know if dying or dieing is right. I mix 'em up. It's dying.:/ Oh well. But anyway, thanks again. :) I'm always open ...

I have nothing to say, for it has already been said before. O.O...Keep writing, I beg of you! Whatever you've done here, keep it in mind, and definitely use this ...

... This, my dear friend, it is fascinatingly interesting. I really do like it. There are a few commas missing here and there, a few grammatical errors, and if I'm ...