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Re: The Dancer
Hey! well i think its quite good but i suggest you change the title... i dont really see much connection... no offense but its just as KnightlyAngel09 said... Other than ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse Chapter 2
Hey! -I think its really good... -what i'm not really sure of is whether this is happening in modern life or way back in time. The fact that Clover was ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: misery
I agree with all break-my-heart said... If you arrange a few spelling mistakes and correct your few flaws it would bring the poem to a higher level other than that ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: The Romance of Jupiter
I think it was a pretty good poem on the whole what u might want to arrange are the long sentences that sometimes make the reader think its a piece ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse (redone)
Yo! My friend mimimac suggested this preview so thought I would give it a shot.... Okay so i know that since u edited it so many times this may sound ...
Feb 3, 2009