Mikko

Boo, you missed a spot. here let me add one little correction: I'm In A Room, and I Can't Get Out. Trapped. Nobody Can't Hear Me Nobody can hear me? ...

Yay! You're back to posting poetry! Nothing to say. This was brilliant. Loved it. Tragic. Loved it. Keep writing! I love reading your poetry! : )

Aww, Smurf, I can see you tried but you still haven't answered some of the reader's questions as in 'what does Hugo feel?' for example. Dad left me home alone ...

How have I never seen this song? It's beautiful and you should see me grooving in a gospel choir way. Nice. I don't have anything to add since everything's been ...

Hey there! First of all, I'd like to say this is very well written especially because I see that you were trying to write it as a haiku- well done ...

*edited* I msut have been really tired when I wrote this...

*Edited* Thanks Noelle!

This really makes me want to read on. I especially liked the description of the cliffs at the beginning (reminded me of Dover beach by Matthew Arnold...) It was really ...

This really makes me want to read on. I especially liked the description of the cliffs at the beginning (reminded me of Dover beach by Matthew Arnold...) It was really ...

This really makes me want to read on. I especially liked the description of the cliffs at the beginning (reminded me of Dover beach by Matthew Arnold...) It was really ...

This is so sweet. You wrote this in fifth grade? Well, it's lovely and touching. I hope your friend is restiing in peace up there.

I enjoyed your poem and I like the structure of your stanzas. The little problem I had has been dealt with already by Poem. Funny enough, I have a similar ...

I really like this poem and its touch of sarcasm! It's simple and has a nice rhyming pattern. Nice work. Keep 'em coming!

Thanks! And actually, I've grown to not like it quite so much so I decided to give it up as a whole.

I love your poem Beebee! I like your style of poetry. Keep them coming! :)