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Re: Problem
Hi there, I liked this poem but found a couple comma use grammer errors -Look below. I tighten my coat around me, Covering my bruises and scars. Hiding them from ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: This Christmas.
Hello, I liked this poem but like dogs said you used alot of simple words. I use them to, but I correct myself by looking into the thesaurus and I ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: You
Hi, great poem it's very...good :). I say i've found no mistakes, grammar and puncuation wise. So your good and great job!
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Memories Part 1
Even though this is seven seconds long, I'm eager to see what happens next. I mean is something funny gonna happen, scary, happy, sci-fi like, who knows? Well I seen ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Attrackted Prologue
This is well written, I found no mistakes in grammar or Punctuation. But to be sure I would re-read and edit, edit edit edit. When you edit your plot could ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Water and Tides
I like this poem, and I found no mistakes at all but just in case I suggest you re-read and edit over and over :). Hope that helped.
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Trapped
This is a well written piece and personaly I loved it, though I found some numbers: stream on a baking summer%u2019s day, is short lived. and Not a drop of ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Alone in my head
I enjoyed this even though I like romance poems better, I only found one mistake though. "don't abandon me don't leave me alone" It's suppose to be. "Don't abandon me ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Satan's Successor - Prologue
I really enjoyed this, and I found no mistakes as far as grammar and punctuation really. I'm looking forward to reading more in the future ;) keep up the good ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: The True Story of Cinderella
Wow, who knew Cinderella was such a lazy -censor-. I enjoyed this story but seen mistakes in your punctuation, but don't worry everyone makes them :). What I would do ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: .
I really enjoyed this story and I really want to read more, though I found a couple spelling mistakes, but everyone makes those nothing big. I fond some spaces where ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Red Carpets
Honestly, I liked this poem even though I have no idea what it's about. I'm really into love peoms, just to point that out. Though, even though it's a good ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: A short scene from my book
I enjoyed this, honestly in my eyes I haven't seen any errors or anything messed up as in grammar and puncuation. I would like to read more :).
Dec 12, 2011