Midsummer'sQueen

The moon shone brightly in the sky illuminating the small dirt path that guided her toward her destination. Try putting a comma after 'sky' The night was deathly silent and ...

-snorts- typical school. Every teenager's personal hell. I liked this poem because it was short, sweet, and to the point. Just a liiiittle tid-bit; what is this day? that i ...

Who am I? I’m lost and cannot speak For now, in life, I’m distant and weak Unraveled and tattered are my thoughts Standing alone by the lullaby shore I’ll continue ...

You actually gave me chills.... and now I think, I might just cry! (in happiness) I was so upset when Susan didn't get her happy-ending with the others in The ...

Hello! I have a bit of advice to give you: “Shut up” hissed Jake before Vejeta could say anymore. {excalamation point?} “You fool, you nitwit! if anyone heard us in ...

This was a very nice beginning! Wonderful job! -claps- I just have a few nitpicks, but they're really not that big: She glanced behind her and saw a Shadow, she ...

Hello! I enjoyed this quite much. It was very well written, in my opinion. Just a few nitpicks: my mother looks at me, worried and I think she asked me ...