MidnightWriter

Haha, grammar nazi. Thanks! Silly mistakes I made... I'll fix them soon. I'll probably post more later!

Thank you! I was trying to work in the descriptions of the four, before. I will take your questions in consideration and try to answer them in the story. Thank ...

Thank you. I see what you mean about the advanced thing. I edited it, thanks again!

I only found a few mistakes, other than that I loved it. If you'd like, I'll post a full review later. I'm definitely coming back to read more. I LOVED ...

It's an OK story. When I started reading it, I saw you said 'Zephyr said, zephyr did this'. That gets really ANNOYING. I would suggest saying 'I,' or 'She'. Good ...