MidnightVampire

Hey! It's MV, or you could call me Sarah, but whatever works really :wink: anyways, onto the review :D This poem was fairly good, it had a beat that worked ...

Again, I seem to be late (but then again, I've been late for all the others while I wait to catch up, so it seems to be a pattern). This ...

Sorry it's taken me so long. I wrote a nice review for you, but I accidently deleted it. So, that's why its taken me extra long to get this to ...

Here is your second review! Always a pleasure! EMPTY STARE Heavy, bulged eyes, overlooking his. It's no surprise, he won't give me a kiss. Compared to the rest of your ...

Hey bailecielo (I hope I spelled that right, I'm pretty sure I didn't but, I tried. I'm terrible at spelling). I'm here to give you your well earned reviews! : ...

Again, it seems to be that I am late. I agree with many of the comments made on your work, so even though I didn't say them, I still agree. ...

Hey Emily!! Did you think I had suddenly disappeared off the face of the earth? Sorry I've been taking so long to get my reviews done. Then again, better late ...

To be honest...this really wasn't the best of your work, (but I sill enjoyed reading it, none the less). I liked the rest of the story much better than this ...

I'm late I'm late I'm late! I'm late for a very important date. That's how I feel, along with my reviews, my math homework and everything has been late. In ...

Sorry I took so long! I've been competing against my friend in ScriptFrenzy this month, and the page count I have to get to to beat her requires me to ...

Hey Sinnful! Here's your long awaited review. Sorry it took so long. I was very pre-occupied. I will review your other story (I have already been able to read it, ...

So I critiqued your first part, and I was curious, so here I am critiquing it again! Its still really early (three) in the I may get temper-mental, nit picky, ...

So here's your review! Just a warning, I'm doing this when its really late where I am (because I'm silly and forgot to do it in the day) and so ...

The room was pitch black except for a few emergency lights that were always on. Regardless, the room was [s]really[/s] dim. This was already suggested. I think it sounds better. ...

“Get off of me, you creepy guy!” and from my groping arms he tore, XD I loved this line. But I am kind of sad. How can you not like ...