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Re: prologue
Hello. I would like to start be saying I like this. It had a good beginning, and got me wondering what it was going on that I don't know. only ...
Nov 5, 2015 -
Re: Angel Affliction - Chapter One
OK first thing I would like to say is its a good concept, only thing holding this back is it feels rather rushed. Malachi grinned, shoving his hands in the ...
Oct 12, 2015 -
Re: A Scale of Power- Chapter Twelve
Hello. you get to be the first person i give a review to. (Yay XD) Anyway just going to point out some things I saw. The icy rain gnawed at ...
Oct 12, 2015