Mickeystwin33

I thought it was a great poem. Yours is one of the first poems on here where the proper use of commas and periods is used, thank you for that. ...

I loved this story. I thought you had some very good ideas and points in this story. I'm sorry I'm not good at reviewing, but I don't see anything wrong ...

I loved the story. I could relate so much, because I was a little girl who would walk by the kickball field and playground, just to hear what people where ...

I thought your story was great. You gave a lot of information, that can be both good and bad. You don't want to bire the reader, but you also don't ...

This poem is amazing. I love this poem. It was a bit confusing at some parts what you where talking about. I think that you should look a bit more ...

I'm not very good at reviews yet, but I do know that this is an awesome poem. I loved reading, but I did notice a few grammatical errors. "Why? Why ...

I like this prologue, but it would be better if you could make a bit longer. You could foreshadow what's to come. I know you don't want to give too ...

I'm not sure what it's about, but I loved it so much. I especially loved your used of the font and color. It made it so much more interesting. I ...

You are an amazing writer, and this poem is awesome. I love it! It is rather long, and that effects the understanding of the poem a little bit, because it ...

I love this poem, because I know exactly how it feels. You want so deeply to understand everything, but yet you don't even understand yourself. You view yourself a second-best, ...

This poem is awesome. I love the message, because most people just don't understand how desperately others could use their help. We all need a leader to help guide us ...

I love this poem. I love the message your trying to convey. It's about a person hiding in silence, because they are scared to speak. It was very confusing though. ...

This is an amazing poem, you have captured every aspect of what happened that day. It is so symbolic to so many people and you just made it simple and ...

This was so sad, but it proves so many good points. People will go so far because of envy, and they don't realize the consequences. It is an amazing piece, ...

Hello CreativeFreak, This is a good start, but you are right the ending needs work. Maybe you could write about how they wish to be free of their life, or ...