Mickeystwin33

I really loved your subject matter. This is so true. This is my favorite part of poem I could truly envision it. I think about our society, And the effort ...

:] I loved everything about this poem. I like how you went through the blind, the deaf, and the mute. The last two lines were my favorite. They just pulled ...

I love your poem. I thought it has great emotion and proves an excellent point. However I have a few suggestions. Oh the world is my playground What else should ...

I love this poem, but I have just a few critiques. Stuck here His worst fear Not satisfied Feeling always tied I think you should make this Always feeling tied. ...

I really liked this poem. I especially liked the French, even though I only half, understood it. I also like how you started and ended talking about the Ocean. We ...

Wow, is all I can say. I never heard of all that fuss over eighth graders. (The most exiting thing I did in eighth grade was a field trip to ...

I loved this poem I'm not good with the nitpicky stuff, I only have one improvement. So she continues To search the world Looking For the girl she once knew ...

This is a great story. I love the fact that you jumped from two different point-of-views, even though it did make it a little confusing. You did not quite explained ...

This is an awesome poem, mostly because, it is very true. Even the kindest and purest of us all resort to the evil known as lying. Everyone knows the pain ...

This was a very good poem. I could visualize every part. I was a little confused at this part Then a kiss on my face, Softer than a bread, This ...

This poem is amazing. I loved every bit of it. I actually read it aloud to myself twice, because I found it so beautiful. I love the theme of this ...

I loved this story.Great use of the language. I am a little bit confused though. Did she kill him? Did he kill her? Why is her blood all over him? ...

This is one of the best short stories I have ever written. I loved it, mostly because I am a person whose good deeds go unnoticed. I love the title, ...

Your story was great. It drew me in, and I could not look away. You are an amazing writer, and almost made me cry at the end. I didn't see ...

Wow your poem is amazing I love it. I thought it was so great. A mannequin is not something that everyone can write a poem about. I saw the title ...