Michelle

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LOVELY! :)

It's put into paragraphs. And choppy. Overall I LIKE IT! :D

Thank you! CHAPTER 2 IS OUT! :D

Thanks! (:

Yeah sorry! I know there's A LOT of dialogue :( I'm making chapter 2 here is a preview: I wake up the next morning with my room cleaned. “Kenny!” My ...

Elizabeth is Chad's mom. AKA- Mrs. Drummond. :D

Oh my! (: I LOVE IT! I love how she said: a red line dashed across. Red line ment preg. Write chapter 2 please! -Michelle

I had the idea!! (;

GREAT! I remember reading a similar story at ur house aha-ah(: It was like her dad moved to DC or something? ANYWAY, GREAT!!!!! :D Michelle

I actually like this, this is where you started to get better! Michelle

Um, I like the plot, but the story is kind of bleh... Did you write this when you were just starting becuase you are much better than this... Michelle

I lov ethis "Fake Date" is one of my favorite novels of yours! Michelle

Christmas passed, but I want Christmas to come back just because of this story! Michelle

I love this story! I like it that it doesn't take place in a school... But where did the british guy come from? You never write about the british ha-ha. ...