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Zets is right but cuco you are truly talented. Nice poem and keep it up. Poetry is one department that I am weak in. Can u help?????

hi I liked the chapter. I think that you should make this more clear like if she can go to school and at work then why they can't go alone ...

Hi Elinor. The story is mavellous and you should write it's next part too.

If you ask whether you should coninue this or not then I will suggest you should for it created a suspense of why he takes pills and what's the strange ...

Hi munchkinzizzles, Lena is right that your character sounds like a girl until you mention the girlfiend thing.Also,guys don't maintain diary. It wasn't interseting as Mei' escape is. You should ...

Hi, Nice story. Keep it up !!!!!! Soundinf too boring, right? I just want to know if the accident was done by this man with radio?

hi twelfth night, Your idea was original and totally entertaining.If you are planning a parody to Twilight and Eclipse then go ahead with me when you complete it. This should ...

Hi, This was a nicely written story.I hope you continue it.

Hi BlackSocialist, I am in total awe.The story is looking like a masterpiece.i have one problem. 'The second man attempted to stop bob, grabbing his arm.' It should be Bob ...

I read till ' Sandpaper stay still.........". i left in the middle because I want a rating so I could read it. I foyu could do that I am ready ...

Hi, Sorry I didn't get the idea much and didn't like it.You can explain and describe in more detail.

Hi Wildwood, I want to read the stoy but I would like you to specify the rating as I am really particular on that.

I want a rating for this story before I read it. Thanks.

Hi Biffle1 Is this the first part?

hi BeautifulDoom, As I have mentioned earlier your story glues me to my computer.A nice work you are doing and the plot is nice.The only problem I have with the ...