MiaParamore

Done editing !!!!!!

Ya I know they help a lot.Ever since I have joined YWS, my writing skills have improved. If you can review my story then I would be grateful. Here's the ...

Are you kidding? Will you post only this much? Okay if you want to post this much only but atleast make your write-up a bit more interesting. If you edit ...

I did this, I did that, I gasped for breath, I cursed in anger, I wanted to get out, I wanted to stay alive, I cried in terror, I wouldn't ...

Thanks Taimur. I will surely go through it.

Hi Ayumi, Thanks on this. This was ione thing I was confused about like can they go to Iraq but then the story wouldn't have come out. Any suggestions? Now ...

Yes hippie-vampire I am too confused about the title. But anyways, twilight12 is doing great.

Thanks cuco. I just did what i felt I wouuld have needed had i been of your age. One Advice: Keep reading books as it helps improving vocabulary,grammar and wriing ...

Whatever it is,I think Bella is so stupid. She is so dull and unhappy all the times. She spreads moroseness.

My god,what a lovely poem. I ade a tune to this song.

Thanks to all who reviewed my work.I will soon be going through all the errors and edit them. I will PM when done.

Thank you Lydia for reading this one. I ahd posted this one for three days and no one had come to read this.

Hi I liked the story and would like you to continue with it.Others have already nit=picked so I don't need to.

Thank you cuco.

Sorry, I got confused.