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Thanks! isha. Working on your story.

Thanks! Isha.

Awesome poem! you have definitely got talent for poems.I liked the feel, rhyming and prose. Loved it.

I loved the story. keep writing! Going to check in chapter 1

Hi. I liked the jealousy factor Alicia has ands it sounds normal. So the ook is called 'diamonds' and there was no description or story of it. I think you'll ...

Hi there Bunnie. I liked the concept of the story. At least it's something different than icebergs. Great start to what can be a wonderful story. Keep Writing!!!!!

Thanks. I will surely work on the errors.

Thank you Lava.

Hi. I loved the story. you explained it smoothly and perfectly. Going to read chapter-2. Thanks for rating it and posting a tiny bit so one can read it at ...

Jessy Annies said This is really good. From the very beginning you capture the audience's attention, by starting at the climax. Just a little thing. At the end when the ...

i am glad my reviews could be of some help.

The dialogue, in my opinion, was a little stiff. No matter how hard Amanda is trying to give a sweet impression to the public, not even the best fakers have ...

Thank you peanut19 for doing this review on my request. Thanks a ton. I have edited it.

Do you have a prologue for this or this is where it starts from.

Thank you TEnnisPrincess. I would be writing soon and I loved your avataar.