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  • Other » General, General Re: She's dancing with Elvis.

    Aww, Tanya, it's a masterpiece. It's brilliant the way you've really painted her image for us. Like Sno said, I'd too love if you could bring in some memory here ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Magi {Ch.8} Part 2

    Hey there, Peyton, once again! Here to review, and I guess I won't have much to say since this is the continuation of the last chapter, but I'll try anyways. ...

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Magi {Ch.8} Part 1

    Hey there, Pointe. I see that you don't have many reviews here, so I hope mine would be of a great help. He was cut off my (by) Greg. %u201CCan%u2019t ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Into Thin Air - Chapter One (REVISED VERSION AS OF 4/1/11)

    Hey there, Fearless! *waves* I am reviewing this first since you haven't got much critiques and you can use some, and the great Azila has already reviewed your short story, ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Corruption - Chapter 1

    Hey there, Scarletta! I must say that you have a pretty username. I just hope that I am of some help. It didn’t matter that he was the governor of ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: To The Shore

    Hey there, Dad! Okay, now I am reviewing your stuff after a long drought, so hopefully it should be fun. Also, I am suffering a mild Reviewer's Block, so sorry ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Magi {Ch.7}

    Hey there, Peyton! Here to review---and sorry for the late(ness): Memories were flowing thick and fast, and Ava struggled to discern the real world through the mask of memories whipping ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Happy Valentine's Day YWS! =)

    You missed...ME? Awesome song, and wow, YWS-ers are prettier people than anyone I know.

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Chamomile

    Hey there, Percy! I am not an expert at reviewing poetry, and neither I am any near to being good. So I'll try, but you should link me to some ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: -

    Hey there, Tam darling. Here to review on request. Hope I can be of any help. But they were the ones who brought the beer. I like her statement here, ...

    Jan 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My Guardian Dog - Rewritten!

    Hey there, Tanya! He fancied himself as our best customer. Coming to your first line, I'd say it was pretty good. I generally like novels where there's no description in ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lil' Big Sis [Contest Entry]

    Hey Jen! Here to review for the Reviewing Trade thing. Alright, so my first reaction to this was-"it does seem like a girl speaking." So I think that's a good ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Magi {ch. 6}

    Hey, there! First of all, I just felt that your speech for Kevin when he was slurring wasn't looking like slurred words, but rather some different sort of accent. But ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Magi {ch.5}

    Hey Pointy. Shrubs here. I won't leave a big note here, just few things. I don't want to spam this thing or anything, and besides I'll give a more thorough ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Magi {ch. 4}

    Hey, there, PD! Kevin flipped a switch, bathing the room in a soft buttery glow. I like the description here, Point. To start off with. I guess your beginning was ...

    Jan 20, 2011


Perhaps when we find ourselves wanting everything, it is because we are dangerously close to wanting nothing.
— Sylvia Plath