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Hey Silver! Shrubs here to review. To first start with, you've got a good story telling style and if you work a bit more on the plot and descriptions, you ...

Hey Lamster! *waves* I actually forgot the point where we stopped since it was a long back ago, so I just wanted to ask you to know where you ended ...

Hey Nike. I just came to drop a comment. I like your writing style, and it's different than what we get to read here. Although I would say that it ...

Yo, Dad! What's up? *don't say ceiling* :lol: Anyway, Shrubs here to review. “And that sucks. You know that riding is the only thing I like doing and now he ...

Hey Skins, Shrubs here to review. Sorry it took me almost two long days to come here. I should have been here earlier. Every kind of resistance I’d ever built ...

Hey Pink! His mother lifted him up and around her waist then jogged for shelter. Around her waist what? Lavira used her tan fingers to wipe her dark , thick ...

Hey Rach! :) Cool blue water rippling gently against the rocks. I don't really think it's cool what you're looking for. Cool is something not which I think fits here. ...

Hey Snoopy! I saw you needed a review for this so I just came. :) “Why do they shine like that , Mum?” I asked around the lollypop that was ...

Hey Skins! You didn't ask for a review on this one, but I wanted to review something so here I was. :) In the 10th century only the rich could ...

Hey Tabby! Shrubs here to review. I hope I can be of some help to you. :) The child was adored, and protected more carefully th a n anything in ...

Hey, Jass! I don't accept poetry reviews and sadly I do want to review it but I can't find anything to comment on. Poetry is not my cup of tea ...

Hey Phoenix! Welcome to YWS! I'd be happy to help you out with your story, as always. :) I remember that night when we all came together, repaired broken friendships, ...

Hey Kaka! What's up? I am so glad you've finally come out of the Writer's Block shell and written something. Bravo! Now it doesn't actually matter if it would be ...

Hey Skins. Hola, you've already got Azila? Aww, now I'll have to pick out things she hasn't said, but I might not read her review. So, sorry if I say ...

Hey Whisperer! Shrubs here to review. I might not give a lengthy review, but would still try to help you! The next day, I went home from school like nothing ...