MexicanDefender

Not sparking a religious debate :P It was very well written and I like it regardless of my own personal belief. just a question though, have you had a near ...

I enjoyed that, I could picture that in a movie. I thought the whole thing was very good and funny to hear, I mean you didn't shoot to far from ...

Sounds like my last relationship :) It was hard to read it without connecting the lines which made it off beat in my head but other than that very short ...

I liked it! I always like detail in writing and how you spoke of the thoughts, very good line :) Overall I would say it was detailed within short sentences ...

Screaming shatters the silence, cold fists pounding on steel doors, all incomprehensible noise and rage and fury and lust. His neighbours do not answer him; they stay still, cold, dead. ...

That was really good. I like to use of rhyming. Just a thought to change the wording a little for "your destroy your goddamn life!" I tried to like get ...

This is really good, the way I was singing it in my head was like a teenage pop star singing it with country music playing but that is just me. ...