Mew2x

I love the poem. The tone of the poem is so sweet that it made the readers' heart beating. I could sense that, in this poem, you really love this ...

Yes, yes, yes, I feel you Hahaha... I love the poem. It has a humor to it. But you have to be careful with the word like 'did't' ... I'm ...

The poem is creepy :D Its all about surviving like the movie Battle Royal. The poem is good. Its very detailed, like "a headless body lies in front of me", ...

The poem is so dark. First of all, I can actually relate to this. I have been on that stage since highschool. It was painful but I endure that pain ...

What a great poem! :D The image is there, very clean, and organize. I am excited to read your next work. I like the part "I am a universe Contained ...