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Re: Is It a Dream? Chapter 1 Confusion
Well you're lucky, because I only have 6 chapters of my writing up. 3 on this, 3 on Sons of Courage. Eventually it will be a lot more.
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Is It a Dream? Chapter 1 Confusion
OK, thanks. This is a very helpful review. I'll get o some of those things soon. The last part you said about a weapon, is something that needs to be ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Shadowdale - Chapter 1
Honored to be called so.
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Fictional Letters: Anomie's first letter to Ishma
OK, sorry about not realizing you put fictional letters. My bad.
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it
Please refer to my latest comment at the top.
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Sons of Courage book 1 Chapter 3 Running scared; escaping to Hannai's
Alright and thank you. I always seem to need more description, but thankfully that isn't a tough thing to fix. I do give details of what Saroo and the girl ...
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it
Refer to my latest comment at the top.
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it
OK, i guess I have t make this VERY clear. as the title says, this is what i found through meditating on psalm 23. This is not a poem to ...
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Journey of Sins: Prologue: The Forgotten King
Oh, i noticed it was the same girl in the prologue as in chapter one. Same hair color and red eyes.
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it
And I was not begging for likes, merely asking people too if they enjoyed it.
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it
OK, but I am the author who is reviewing, so i am entitled to tell you what I think of your review.
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Journey of Sins: Prologue: The Forgotten King
From previous chapters, or from your new chapter?
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it
Thanks, it worked.
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Is It a Dream? Chapter 1 Confusion
I have to say you're a very encouraging reviewer. I'll look at the sentence you mentioned, and perhaps add a bit about when I fall. Maybe about being unconscious and ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it
What exactly do you mean in the way of imagery. i mean these are mostly just thoughts I have.
Sep 11, 2013
