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All done! tell me what you think. BTW, I wanted it to be awe-inspiring, because that is how I feel every time i see a sunset.

Thanks for the poem. For me this is what i believe, and this is what I write, so it wasn't really something I thought about as being courageous, but I'm ...

Thanks a lot tgirly. I will get on those lines right away. I did notice how many times I used And as the beginning of a line. I'm glad you ...

S I edited those things you pointed out. If you had reviewed when I first put this up then your review would've most likely been about three times a s ...

I was just skimming through and spotted this. It should be come on, not come one. Don’t you dare say ‘Chestnut.’” Fiera scolded. “Come one, you can come up with ...

Well you're lucky, because I only have 6 chapters of my writing up. 3 on this, 3 on Sons of Courage. Eventually it will be a lot more.

OK, thanks. This is a very helpful review. I'll get o some of those things soon. The last part you said about a weapon, is something that needs to be ...

Honored to be called so.

OK, sorry about not realizing you put fictional letters. My bad.

Please refer to my latest comment at the top.

Alright and thank you. I always seem to need more description, but thankfully that isn't a tough thing to fix. I do give details of what Saroo and the girl ...

Refer to my latest comment at the top.

OK, i guess I have t make this VERY clear. as the title says, this is what i found through meditating on psalm 23. This is not a poem to ...

Oh, i noticed it was the same girl in the prologue as in chapter one. Same hair color and red eyes.

And I was not begging for likes, merely asking people too if they enjoyed it.