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Hey, the words mashed together are because for some reason it makes those words links to websites (don't ask me why it did that) and I can't change it. @ajruby12 ...

At least ten. Maybe more.

Most welcome:)

Yes. They are all long short stories I guess is one way of putting it.

BTW. chapter one of book 2 is coming out Monday.

Thanks a lot. Like others have been told I will get on these soon. But yes, I can see a lot of room for improvement here so thanks. Will contact ...

you are welcome :)

Have had that problem.

Perfect. Thanks a lot.

I understand. This is a rather short chapter. I was struggling with tell for a lot of this story, but I felt some of it couldn't be avoided. But I ...

You just took a Green Room review away from me . . . AGAIN! Really, maybe I should start calling which ones I'm going to review.

Dragon, I just got tipped on this the other ay, and I thought it would help to keep your reviews nice and tidy. Next time you find a line and ...

Nah. JK:)

Totally have it as well.

Hahahahahahahahaha. Alright, and thanks. I cracked up when I read your comment. did not realize that before.