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Glad to be of service, and I was pretty sure you intended on making the scene sick, so I was just complimenting you in a way:D

Thanks. Would you suggest changing the word one, to room, or living space?

I use semicolons more then some people and I can't say for sure that it should be there so it's fine. Glad I could help.

Thanks. *My dumb E key* but her name is Jesse, so maybe I should start it out with Jesse and then go to Jess, verses the other way around.

Ok, gotcha.

Hey, the words mashed together are because for some reason it makes those words links to websites (don't ask me why it did that) and I can't change it. @ajruby12 ...

At least ten. Maybe more.

Most welcome:)

Yes. They are all long short stories I guess is one way of putting it.

BTW. chapter one of book 2 is coming out Monday.

Thanks a lot. Like others have been told I will get on these soon. But yes, I can see a lot of room for improvement here so thanks. Will contact ...

you are welcome :)

Have had that problem.

Perfect. Thanks a lot.

I understand. This is a rather short chapter. I was struggling with tell for a lot of this story, but I felt some of it couldn't be avoided. But I ...