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this is the most interesting review I've ever gotten.

Thanks for the punctuation and grammar points, they really help.

Shall I count on you to want chapter 2?

Hey Pomp, I'll hop on dem problems real fast! I'll let you know when chapter 2 comes out. Glad you liked the military parts! I love the military and know ...

Oh man . . . Mariah Read= Mary Read? Famous woman pirate O_O

ahh! OK i must have deleted my response on accident. I hopped on most of those little details you mentioned and I'll be expanding on the whole scene with David, ...

did you get a reply to this?

Thank you Fiend. I'll be working on when he wakes up to slow things down a little and also extend the end a tad. I'll let you know when chapter ...

Ah this is so hard. Nothing is as it seems in this review. No gonna say anymore. I'll try to add a little bit to it. But . . .

OK Liaya you have about thirty stories going so I can't keep track of you ;)

I'm happy and impressed to see someone on here is actually consistently sticking with their novel past chapter 5

you got that right ;)

you just keep getting 'em!Never knew I could help so much

you got 24 likes!!!!!

yeah i understand, but it comes out looking kind of wrongi think