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You got featured? So good! This was so nice and true. It had heart behind it Sushi! That girl wearing the strange clothes, she prefers comfort over appearance Dat's me ...

this should NOT be sent to all reviewers. Sorry that was kind of an outburst. If you wish to hear my reasons chat me up some time! ~Messenger

did my comment not post? Aw shoot. Please don;t go Monsters. I've come to realize that reviewers like you though harsh can be a great help in a writers life. ...

That's a very well-written and neutral post Monsters :)

fantastic!

this is the most interesting review I've ever gotten.

Thanks for the punctuation and grammar points, they really help.

Shall I count on you to want chapter 2?

Hey Pomp, I'll hop on dem problems real fast! I'll let you know when chapter 2 comes out. Glad you liked the military parts! I love the military and know ...

Oh man . . . Mariah Read= Mary Read? Famous woman pirate O_O

ahh! OK i must have deleted my response on accident. I hopped on most of those little details you mentioned and I'll be expanding on the whole scene with David, ...

did you get a reply to this?

Thank you Fiend. I'll be working on when he wakes up to slow things down a little and also extend the end a tad. I'll let you know when chapter ...

Ah this is so hard. Nothing is as it seems in this review. No gonna say anymore. I'll try to add a little bit to it. But . . .

OK Liaya you have about thirty stories going so I can't keep track of you ;)