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i shall hop on those ideas! I agree with you 100%

glad you liked it!

You didn't . . .

Good!

thanks pinkie!!

hahaha. What did you think?

Thank you Iggy. I agree with everything you said. I guess i need to make some things clearer. I thought I wrote the memories in a way that showed that ...

Hee hee hee, hi Witchy witch. That one awkward sentence was because of word war. I had a perfect way to say it, and then my brain went "qwfgretgrhn" and ...

Thank you cheetah! I will hop on those nitpicks. I was unsure of the smile part, but you know how light and funny Anna is in the movie . . ...

haha yeah, I thought people would be surprised. ;) Yes, doing Elsa's side was fun :) Yes, I did try to stay close to the Let It Go beat. Apparently ...

thanks for the nitpicks. Okay! There was one part I got a little confused at. Isn't this the scene at the beginning, where Anna was trying to get Elsa to ...

Berk. An island in the middle of nowhere, with nine months of winter. This is a poor introduction. I would start it like, Berk was a remote island, where snow ...

i switched the order around.

thanks for those nitpicks! I'll definitely hop on them when I edit! ~Messenger