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Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction
hahaha. What did you think?
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction
Thank you Iggy. I agree with everything you said. I guess i need to make some things clearer. I thought I wrote the memories in a way that showed that ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction
Hee hee hee, hi Witchy witch. That one awkward sentence was because of word war. I had a perfect way to say it, and then my brain went "qwfgretgrhn" and ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction
Thank you cheetah! I will hop on those nitpicks. I was unsure of the smile part, but you know how light and funny Anna is in the movie . . ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction
haha yeah, I thought people would be surprised. ;) Yes, doing Elsa's side was fun :) Yes, I did try to stay close to the Let It Go beat. Apparently ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction
thanks for the nitpicks. Okay! There was one part I got a little confused at. Isn't this the scene at the beginning, where Anna was trying to get Elsa to ...
Jun 3, 2014 - Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 2 - A Bloody Mess Jun 1, 2014
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Re: How To Train Your Dragon Prologue And Chapter 1- An Addition To The Story *Added flashback for Willowpaw1*
Berk. An island in the middle of nowhere, with nine months of winter. This is a poor introduction. I would start it like, Berk was a remote island, where snow ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 3 Part 2 - Plans Sabotaged
i switched the order around.
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Fern - Chapter 4: Dragon Attack
thanks for those nitpicks! I'll definitely hop on them when I edit! ~Messenger
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Fern - Chapter 4: Dragon Attack
hi Silver, thanks for the review! Hehehe, Fern does NOT have wings. I don't know why I wrote that ?_? Also, (referring to previous review) Jumper is a she. I ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Fern - Chapter 2: Visiting Jumper
heya Silver! Thank you for the compliments. I am just going to leave this as a filler I think, because like you said, it lets the readers know what they ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Fern - Chapter 1: First flight
hey Silver, don't feel bad. This is what reviews are for! Yes it is for a younger audience. I am thinking 13-14 is around the right age. Definitely not a ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 1 - Breakfast at the Inn
stupid computer >.< Their should be no link
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 5 Part 1 - A Card Game To Remember
MWahahahahha *Ahem* The card game was really just to show a little more of Kinnard's character. SSSh, And yes, I forgot about the challenge, and then remembered it as I ...
May 22, 2014
