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Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 5 Part 1 - Running to Check on Kalan
hmm . . . i had those typos corrected. i must have copy-pasted from the wrong spot. i shall get dem fixeded soon
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 6 Part 1 - An Awkward Dinner
I mentioned founders Day back in chapter 1 or 2 :P
Jun 16, 2014 -
Re: My night with Peter Pan.
it's a neutral feeling XD The last line was really interesting . . .
Jun 13, 2014 -
Re: My night with Peter Pan.
oh . . . ok
Jun 13, 2014 -
Re: My night with Peter Pan.
what did I just read . . .
Jun 13, 2014 -
Re: my bro's parody on "Let it go"
there were a few messups like the deleted line before "as long as it's food i'm gonna E-eat it anyway" my bad :(
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: Untitled- Prologue and Chapter 1
I understand! I feel the same way, only vica versa. If you need any help let me know!
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Untitled- Prologue and Chapter 1
I just want to preface this with the fact that I may not finish this. Right now it's just an attempt. So try not to get too attached. As you ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Fern - Chapter 3: Fire Trials
Hey thanks for the review! A key tip in reviewing: if you scroll down you'll see that sunshine put my writing in quotes. You can do that by doing enter ...
Jun 5, 2014 -
Re: A Pep Talk From A Movie Star, And Other Calamities I Face in the Hunger Games
i see those little words
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 2 - A Bloody Mess
it's an inn. people come from all over de world!
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 2 - A Bloody Mess
He started bleeding because when Kinnard pulled him own from the wagon he crashed to the ground and opened up the wound again. Also, the guy wanted to get away, ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: stardust
boldly, poetry doesn't have those rules actually., I used to think it did, but it turns out that you can leave words uncapitalized in poetry.
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 1 - A Card Game To Remember
why did i never see this review before >_>
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 1 - A Card Game To Remember
The card game was sort of fun for Kinnard to be honest. As for him being in the wagon, he DID know that someone was a round. He just tried ...
Jun 4, 2014
