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so very punny it makes me smile xD

gaah i really need to revise this chapter. Miles is 15, Castor 17, Kalan is about 19. i had a prologue but it was cut out. it would have explained ...

Well that was fast! "Hello Castor, been sleeping inn" There's an extra n there. It was a pun. the double N is intentional. As for the thoughts, the amount diminishes ...

tank you BLue i had these typos and stuff fixed up, but i must've gotten the wrong draft (i have it in two different places) and this is the grammarly ...

i think it would move faster if they were not in parts, but for easy reading and reviewing, i'm leaving in parts right now.

hmm . . . i had those typos corrected. i must have copy-pasted from the wrong spot. i shall get dem fixeded soon

I mentioned founders Day back in chapter 1 or 2 :P

it's a neutral feeling XD The last line was really interesting . . .

oh . . . ok

what did I just read . . .

there were a few messups like the deleted line before "as long as it's food i'm gonna E-eat it anyway" my bad :(

I understand! I feel the same way, only vica versa. If you need any help let me know!

I just want to preface this with the fact that I may not finish this. Right now it's just an attempt. So try not to get too attached. As you ...

Hey thanks for the review! A key tip in reviewing: if you scroll down you'll see that sunshine put my writing in quotes. You can do that by doing enter ...

i see those little words