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did you know you can put lemon sharks in a state of unconsciousness by flipping them on their back. They continue to breath because of some sort of reflex in ...

ahahahah you've gotten better :P

I hope it isn't your wedding O_O *Ahem* Why thankee thar Blue :) Kalan is older then castor by about a year or two, and Miles is 15. Castor's 17. ...

dis is a good review XDDD so long and tip-filled and all :P

hey Woflie. Gaah, i forgot to tell you. I need to get the edited version of these chapters up. I had them, but when i switched folders i accidentally put ...

No wonder youz a better writer then me :P Anyway, thanks for the review. Some of those nitpicks I just fixed, and me and Night will discuss and upgrade the ...

there is no middle rating so it's sixteen. it's a loose rating. Also, actually we made about an equal amount of mistakes, and generally i make way more than Night. ...

I don't know what to say. This is so good! It is really making me want to read the rest of the story!!

the POv's shouldn't pose a big problem. I haven't heard anyone state anything about it yet, and i've had about 15 people read at least some bits of the story. ...

"Comma after before.

so very punny it makes me smile xD

gaah i really need to revise this chapter. Miles is 15, Castor 17, Kalan is about 19. i had a prologue but it was cut out. it would have explained ...

Well that was fast! "Hello Castor, been sleeping inn" There's an extra n there. It was a pun. the double N is intentional. As for the thoughts, the amount diminishes ...

tank you BLue i had these typos and stuff fixed up, but i must've gotten the wrong draft (i have it in two different places) and this is the grammarly ...

i think it would move faster if they were not in parts, but for easy reading and reviewing, i'm leaving in parts right now.