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Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 1.2
not really. and if they are, it's from reading yours XD
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Pack - Chapter Four - Newt
it waaaaaaaas getting so gooood
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: The Lemon Shark
heheh yeh
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: The Lemon Shark
me neither. it was on youtube. it's a video about killer whales killing great whites.
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: The Lemon Shark
it's little known. just saw it on a nature program the other day.
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: The Lemon Shark
did you know you can put lemon sharks in a state of unconsciousness by flipping them on their back. They continue to breath because of some sort of reflex in ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 2 - The Brawl and Visitor
ahahahah you've gotten better :P
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 2 - The Dispute
I hope it isn't your wedding O_O *Ahem* Why thankee thar Blue :) Kalan is older then castor by about a year or two, and Miles is 15. Castor's 17. ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: Purple Punches Chapter 1 - Purple Business
dis is a good review XDDD so long and tip-filled and all :P
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 2 - A Bloody Mess
hey Woflie. Gaah, i forgot to tell you. I need to get the edited version of these chapters up. I had them, but when i switched folders i accidentally put ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: Purple Punches Chapter 1 - Purple Business
No wonder youz a better writer then me :P Anyway, thanks for the review. Some of those nitpicks I just fixed, and me and Night will discuss and upgrade the ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Purple Punches Chapter 1 - Purple Business
there is no middle rating so it's sixteen. it's a loose rating. Also, actually we made about an equal amount of mistakes, and generally i make way more than Night. ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Shadowdale - Final Chapter Snippet
I don't know what to say. This is so good! It is really making me want to read the rest of the story!!
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 5 Part 1 - Running to Check on Kalan
the POv's shouldn't pose a big problem. I haven't heard anyone state anything about it yet, and i've had about 15 people read at least some bits of the story. ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 6 Part 1 - An Awkward Dinner
"Comma after before.
Jun 21, 2014
