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  • Short Story » Spiritual, Action / Adventure Re: The Hope of a Kingdom

    Thanks for stopping by :] I appreciate pointing out some of the boring grammatical and syntax stuff. Definitely my weakest point such as with the capitalization inconsistencies. I meant to ...

    Jan 6
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Action / Adventure Re: The Hope of a Kingdom

    XDDDD not exactly a review but I'll take it ;p

    Jan 5
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Fury in the Wind cho. 4 - Fleeting Hope

    Thanks for all the reviews Tikaya! Feel free to go back and read the first 3 if youre interested

    Dec 5, 2025
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Petrichor

    Ah the welding of legs was juat because I had an original lije using another water metaphor and I just rhought it sounded really bad when spoken out loud lol

    Dec 1, 2025
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Petrichor

    I somehow never saw this..... but tha k yiu for the feedback! This song was pretty personal when my wife was very pregnant and summer was ending and the resolution ...

    Dec 1, 2025
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Romantic Re: Inspiration and Infatuation: the Dream Killers

    Now go express yourself through words

    Oct 16, 2025
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Literature Re: It's Finally Fall

    Thaaaaank you i cannot.wait! They only get better

    Oct 8, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: The Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows: Chapter 1.1

    I hope she comes back to this ToT

    Sep 28, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Fury in the Wind Prologue - A Shadow in the Snow

    @Alliyah I got this spam review on all 5 parts of this story:/

    Sep 24, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Laughing Jack gives Aeliana a show!

    Well that gets dark lolol

    Sep 24, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 16

    Put the quote in between the two sets of brackets. Super easy but makes reviews look a lot more xlean and professional i think c:

    Sep 20, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 16

    Ok good! Everything you said is how I had interpreted it. The line about cleavage is what threw me for a loop. Same goes for the coping. It seems like ...

    Sep 20, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Hills of Kest-Elin

    Sep 17, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 13

    No i think it was clear ehen it was a hallucination and when it wasnt

    Sep 15, 2025
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Never Alone

    Thank you for all the reviews! If you need more stuff to review by all means keep plowing through my portfolio xD this is one of my favorite things I've ...

    Sep 9, 2025


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