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Re: A Lost Cause - Ch 2
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, this was a great second chapter, and emjayc covered most of the things I was going to point out, but let ...
Oct 24, 2013 -
Re: Prank Wars
The Messenger Knight here to review . . . . . Uh . . . What do I say? I don't get this at all. Script or not you have ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: I Remember Peru
Wait, you got to go to Peru? *Huffs* Oh Hi, I'm here to review for you :) You don't have any punctuation when there is talking, but besides that your ...
Oct 21, 2013 -
Re: A Lost Cause - Ch 1
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. SO, the first two paragraphs felt too fast for me, but after that I was into it all the way. I really ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: sometimes
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So the biggest bug in this is the fact that you have no punctuation. Not only does it not look as good, ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: Her
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, no punctuation? :( No, no no . . .!!!! Can't take it. OK, so *Recomposes* This is actually a quite nice ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: "Abandoned" Part 1
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So this review is basically technical stuff since this poem for me didn't say a whole lot. I think a part 2 ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: My Lord, My Savior
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. I shall not lay thee head, down on the devils pillow, but knell at the feet, of my lord, for he is ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: Crucifix
The MEssenger Knight here to review for KotGR. First off I'm a Christian, so I was happy to see this. Marry kneels at my feet. She cries and begs the ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: From Us Teens
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. And guess what: this is going to be my 300th review. Aren't you lucky? Probably not.:) *Organizes himself for review.* I really ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Strengths of the U.S. Constitution & Government System
The Messenger Knight here, and after reading Dragon's review I don't have a whole lot to fill this review with. :) Let me say that the revised first line is ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Lost in your words
The Messenger Knight here to review for your today, and for my KotGR. OK, so you don't have i capitalized every time that it is speaking about yourself. This is ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Rachel Rose
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. I was really enjoying this until these spots where I noticed a few technical errors. I want to hold you close, never ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Basketball Heart
The Messenger Knight here to review for you, and KotGR. So, I really liked this piece. It was well written, and I liked how you transitioned from paragraph to poem ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: Fantastical Book 1: The Mirror (Chapter Two)
The Messenger Knight here to review faithfully for KotGR. but they knew that nothing would help, only make things worse for them. I just feel like this line is wrong. ...
Oct 16, 2013