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Hey, I'm here for the last bit you've got out so far Aoliye: Ow-lee-yay Thaaaaank you I was so confused on how to pronounce that name xD Live, die, and ...

Hey, I'm here for part 2! Before starting, I must say that I would advise against the recap. Honestly part 1 is so short, that if someone is reading it ...

Hey, MEssy here for a lil review, so here we go. 1. MAn, that detailed description was just gorgeous!!! I loved thato pening paragraph. A lot of people say that ...

Hey, MEssy here! Just a couple thoughts. First off, I didn't think I'd be reading an essay on my Summer Break from School but eh. So. 1. The facts are ...

Hey, it's Messy Well then, this just went straight to the heart! Apologies is such a delicate and emotional matter sometimes but you just jumped right in! Couple of thoughts. ...

Hey, Mess here. Couple things for you! 1. This is solidly written. You don't go too far into detail, which at first works well, although at the end I would ...

Hi, here for a quick review. Couple quick thoughts. 1. So this isn't from Violet's viewpoint, but you seem to make the connection that she and you are similar in ...

I'm home mom!! Don't know how long lol anyway Centius the Wise had the flu. Who doesn't right now -_- Philostratus, his robe charred and splattered with ink as usual, ...

Hey! Just for your information before I begin I used to be pretty active on here, but I've been on a long hiatus and am just coming back so sorry ...

Hey! Here to give this my best review in the little time I have left! So, you have a few nitpicky things, like using "Their" for there, and you use ...

hey! This shouldn't have to sit in the green room for this long! That's a shame! So lemme help you out :) What truly why add the truly? is there ...

hey! this does not deserve to be in the cold green room of Unreadness for so long! Luckily I have come to rescue it! reasonably young But reason can differ ...

Hey! I'm here XD Right off the bat I love this poem. It just feels... RIGHT. Makes me remember that poetry can actually be done well by people (me so ...

Hey there! review as requested! Lemme go through the nitpicks first and then I'll get to the actual story. I'm struggling to envision these birds. you talk of wings, but ...

hey, so I just read the first tid-bit with the king reading the letter. Nice descriptions. Gives me a very medievalish feel. also, Skyrim? Or are you just using some ...