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Hey, back for at least one section today. They stopped short halfway down the path, when they all took in the sight of the police officers standing in front of ...

Hey, here for another quick stop-in Probably won't get to 5.2. for a while, but I figured I should get a headstart on it. ('i'll catch up some day) I've ...

Hey Noelle, here for another review. Alekos turned, his chair scraping against the wood floor. “I don’t want to. He’s going to tell me the same thing as always. ‘Get ...

Heere for part 2 today :D “Winnie,” Carter said again, hurrying to compose himself. He wiped sweat-soaked hands off on his pants before wringing them together. “Um, I- what are ...

Hey, I'm back. As if. Carter ducked his head, wondering why Gideon didn’t just admit that he thought Carter wouldn’t be capable of doing such a simple task. Why he ...

hehe one more at least! I've actually got some complaints for once with this story xD 1.) That beginning line just feels cheap. You set up the end of the ...

hey Scribbles I'm here. just about two months late xD I really like this chapter. As has been said previously, you have a nice blend of Carter's everyday job, mixed ...

Hey Noelle, I'm back for two in one. I like this chapter. Again, I feel like the beginning is a bit stereotypical in the description of Rebecca. Would Alekos really ...

Hey, Noelle, trying to get some reviews in today. This chapter starts off a bit tell-y. I'm not sure that we need to know Mary and Terrance's relation in as ...

Hey Scribs, finally got to one of your chapters. Feel awful about taking so loooong but NO REGRETS MOVE FORWARD So. I absolutely adored this chapter. Your conversations feel very ...

Hey, it's me again :D I'm kind of confused. Ryder can see the city, even see a lot of details of the walls and the statues which can't be THAT ...

Hey Noelle, sorry that I'm so incredibly late! So, I'm still kind of lost on the setting of everything. Not so much as in where we are per se, although ...

Hey Noelle, my concentration levels after work are quickly dropping into the negative hundreds but here I am so yay -_- So, there are a decent amount of grammar nitpicks ...

Hey, I'm back again for at least one more review today. Bazzoli had a hose that Carter could have easily used, except that Bazzoli kept it locked in his private ...

Hey Inks, Mess here weeks late. I just have a jumble of thoughts that I'm going to throw out since you've already got some solid reviews. The sky was growing ...