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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: -

    Hello fellow! Mersize here for a review. :) I did not get the story quite well since I have not read the other chapter, only this one. I promise I ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: My Only Hope

    Hi there! This is Mersize for a review!! I do not know what kind of song it is. I mean, the genre. I do not know if it is a ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Life of Stephanie Pritchard~Chapter 2: Birthday Party (Part 1)

    Hi, mate. Mersize here to review. I will be waiting for part 2. I do think it is going to be nice, when Steph finds out that the party is ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Hatshepsut: the Forgotten Pharaoh

    Here is Mersize to review. Sounds interesting! I mean I really like stories that have to do with kingdoms, kings, and queens. Who gets it, who fights for getting it, ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Life of Stephanie Pritchard~Chapter 1: 8th Grade Prom

    It looks like it just finished; you narrowed the whole story into 1 chapter. This is good material; it is really interesting; it grabbed my attention. It is good, but ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: .

    Oh my God! I thought that it would have a happy ending; it is really cool, though. In my opinion you should consider doing it longer, it is good stuff. ...

    May 27, 2014


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