Merry_Haven

jasmine12- Or can I just call you jasmine? Anyway, I've never really checked out the "other" fiction tab and now I totally regret it. Your Untouched ch. 1 is the ...

catherinet- Okay, that was kind of odd. Um, where's the plot? You're missing a few quotation marks and there's little description about her sister, mom, Danny and herself. What are ...

Ashley- NO!!!!!!!!!!! Amycus can't be dead. But don't tell me. I want to read on... Of all her letters, I like Timandra's the most. She's so funny! Isadora's fantasy about ...

Ashley- Wow, that last part was really sad. It's like their friendship was ending and they'll never see each other again. As always your amazing at thoughts and emotions. Seeping ...

Certainly Love- Yeah, who is Amber Harrison? The 1789 thing is great. I just love historical stories and with a tad bit of vampires. So where's the glittering masquerade ball, ...

Hopeful_Youth- Wow. I really like this prelude. It was short but it gave total description of this perfect boy. Um, what's the girls name? We know Patricia is her mom's ...

Whoa. That was really good. I just loved how you were abrupt at the last sentence. That Charlie Boon was there. Greg seems nice but I definitely like Jojo. Jojo ...

salsashanno- Wow. This is just amazing! I love it. I had to reread one part, involving cats. The teacher wants to eat CATS!? That's just creepy. But totally made me ...

salsashanno- You know, I'm starting to really like this. The IM thing was a cute touch. Oh, and are you planning to write about how the met when they were ...

salsashanno- When I saw that you had St. Patricks Day, I freaked. I just love that holiday. All that green. *smiles* The title: Who Would've Thought? didn't make sense, but ...

Ashley- Oh my god! Are you going to write more to this? It was so good and gripping. I'm breathless. It was so breathtaking. I just love this story. I ...

Ashley- I am proud of you. You're punctuation was done very well. When I read about Caradoc, he seemed like a god, like Isadora mentioned. Sorry, if I can't think ...

Ashley- Oh, I like, I like this. It was getting very intense between Isadora and Lucretius. And of course, Nicandro comes to the rescue. And I'm starting to wonder about ...

Ha! You totally made me laugh when I saw what she was reading. How hilarious. Twilight, of all books. *rolls eyes* To the point, yes it was short{maybe too short ...

Ashley- I noticed I had to reread the last four paragraphs because I couldn't figure out what was going on with Nicandro. This was short, but I enjoyed it a ...