Merry_Haven

jasmine - Okay, I saw a grammar mistake but I don't know how to use the quote thing. You're gonna have to show me. Anyway, I thought it was a ...

jasmine - Hey, so I read up to this chapter and there's nothing left. Like no more. What is wrong with you?! You have to post more to this! Okay, ...

Ashley - I seriously enjoyed e-v-e-r-y word of this. It was that good. And I'm totally serious. You seriously have to write more to this. I need more of this. ...

Ashley - No way, that did not just happen. God, I'm liking this more and more. You totally have to write part 5. I really want to know what's going ...

Ashley - So that's what happened to the mom. She what...drowned? Well, that's what I could make out when reading this. If Lokesh doesn't want to be a warrior. Then ...

jasmine - This does seem like a twilight thing but only with the William thing. Other than that, it has nothing to do with that book. I see that the ...

Mally - Um, what's going on with the girls and that guy? You could break up the paragraphs, so it's easier to read. But it's totally up to you. For ...

In_the_Moonlight - This was short and quick, but easy to understand. Knowing this is a short story, you could give little descriptions of Heather, Jamie, and Trevor. What do they ...

girlwithquestions - Wow, that was really touching. And I'm glad you added the part of the past. To get to know a little more of Lena and her family. The ...

jasmine - Whoa, wait a minute there. Damien's a vampire? I would have never guessed. Yet, I read on... So Damien no Nigel was really there at the accident? That's ...

Ashley- So first of all, what happened to their mom? Did she die or how did she die? But I must read on... I was never for ancient Indian stories ...

jasmine- Oh my god! I loved it. This is my most favorite chapter yet! This was so good. I'm breathless. Okay, at the end confused me. So like Jasper didn't ...

jasmine- I am totally loving Jasper! He is so romantic when he was with Genna in that room. Man, he's so dreamy. So what's with Genna and the seizure? And ...

jasmine- Oh my god! Oh my god! Is she really going into the room? She has to and meet Jasper again. Dude, I really wanted to know about him. Like ...

jasmine- So what happened to Genna's dream 'boy'? I really wanted to know more about him and well, the dream. But I guess I'll have to read on. I thought ...