Merry_Haven

Ashley- Whoa. Dude, Rebecca's feisty. I seriously thought Rebecca was going to do something to Issac. Then again, Sophia was there. And she was tempted to do it, also. I ...

Jasmine- First off, I am so sorry that I'm so behind with your story Untouched. Anyway, here I go... I had no idea that Jessica and Heather were vampires. That ...

Chapter Twelve Jasmine? Hello? Dude, why didn't you pm me that this chapter was up? I am so mad at you. Okay. Okay. I forgive you. “Bailey is still sleeping.” ...

Sarah- Haha! I totally laughed with the whole Austen thing. Man, you gotta love her. I have to say Northanger Abbey is my fav. and Pride and Prejudice is way ...

Author's Note: This is quite a short chapter, but I liked it's shortness, and it would have been overdone had I lengthened it. I didn't want to cram too many ...

This is the last chapter I have written for this story...and it might be the last. I'm afraid to tell you all but this story probably won't be continued. WHAT!!!! ...

I stayed by his side as Landon, the one who changed me, readied for the transformation. Would Landon be her father or someone else? Landon was ready to drain his ...

Chapter five Oh, I am so ready for this. I am p-u-m-p-e-d up!! :D :D I turned on the radio to rid the silence. As I turned it on, the ...

Awaken-the-Dark - So I have to ask...with the title called Angels Will Fall, is there going to be angels in it? Well, I didn't really spot out any grammar mistakes, ...

Chapter Eleven Yeah!!! I am so pumped up for this. “So, who’s Sebastian?” I asked, forgetting that little detail. (Authors note: Thanks Merry!!!) Are you talking about me? Anyway, your ...

Chapter Ten Yeah!! I'm so excited. Jasper was so distracted; he started changing the temperature in the house during the day. One minute it was hot, the next it was ...

CastlesInTheSky - Oh, no. That's so sad. :cry: Why did he have to die for? Any who, let me get on with my questions and opinions. I didn't see and ...

Sarah- As always, reading your Broken story is just touching. I wish there was more. This part reminds me of that old tale of the candle stick girl on Christmas ...

jasmine - Yeah, first to review!!! Well, I think so. :? Besides dancing to the radio, I'm loving this. Okay, first off I rarely saw any grammar mistakes. Maybe someone ...

Oh, that was so cool. “Look. So you have a new friend. That’s great, that really is. But I don’t think you should depend on someone to feel good about ...