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Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Prologue and Chapter 1
Good Job! I like the way that you used the poem to pull the reader into the story. But just a couple quick grammatical errors. When you wrote"don't yell on ...
Apr 10, 2015 -
Re: Prince Derek and the Road to Nothyng Chapters 6 & 7
Good job! First of all this is a really good idea for a children's book. And not too dark and scary (based on what I read when I was that ...
Apr 10, 2015 -
Re: Monday, March 2nd, 2015
Good job! First of all I really like the idea of writing this from the view of her diary. I'm just going to be a little nitpicky with some grammatical ...
Apr 10, 2015