Mentalist

Thank you, for the comments.

Thank you, for the critique. I put that in parenthesis for to connect that she's now dead in present time. I've also changed the last stanza up a bit, so ...

I separated the word "puppet" to keep the rhythm of the poem, like I did with "violence". Thank you for the critiques, I do realize I have a problem with ...

Very helpful reviews, I'll be sure to make the changes and clear up things in my next draft. Whenever I get around to writing it.