MemoryHunter

THANK YOU FOR THIS REVIEW :3 I understand this Luke character whatever and I am going to fix it~ Thank you once again kind stranger

Imma go edit it~ (Translation: you were so helpful that I noticed my ignorance)

Thank you for your review~ The spacing thing is very helpful!

THANK YOU FOR YOUR AWESOME REVIEW, A PRO WRITER ON THE INTERNET. I will keep your advice in mind. I realized that the last stanza does break the flow. Actually, ...

Yay! I didn't think penetrating was the right word either, but you know what, it kind of works now xD About the capitalization thing, I have been perfectly aware of ...

YEAH I KNOW IT IS OBVIOUS. But it is a cliffhanger nonetheless. Don't worry though, I just wanted to know if you would choose the obvious word or not or ...

@AliceAfternoon whadya think

Heeeello. This is my first comment in a looooong time. Recently came back to YWS and what a work! This is cool. I love it. Though MadWriter/@AliceAfternoon (WHY YOU CHANGE ...

Thank you for that awesome review! Of course I know what the narrator is doing with those items. Lying there, writing about this guy, drinking cola cans while writing to ...

Thank you for that awesome review! Of course I know what the narrator is doing with those items. Lying there, writing about this guy, drinking cola cans while writing to ...

Thank you for that awesome review! Of course I know what the narrator is doing with those items. Lying there, writing about this guy, drinking cola cans while writing to ...

HI. It's okay. You don't have to say you're blonde. Everyone would not get this. Including me. I mean, uh, I made this poem as a reference to 'tsundere'. You ...

Well, by emo talk I meant Eloise in the first chapter when she was on the train and stuff. I just exaggerated it. It's not emo talk xD And also ...

Also I only said this now but about the capitalization: I wanted to do something else with my writing, not just the standard text thing. I thought it would be ...

Aw it's too bad you're just online now. I'm off to school T^T