Melodie

I like this. It has it's issues but I like it.

Who's Ann Rice?! oh my . .. Anyway, I'll have to check out Regarding Vampires.

You know Ann Rice!? I agree DEMAND her teachings.

Areida, I know exactly what you mean about Odysseus. I didn't like him at all. I thought his character was tricky and decietful. My favorite is Achilles. I think his ...

hmmm it did take me a while to get used to the style of her writing, especially in "Interview" because of the way Louis seems to be talking to me ...

Thanks for the comments. I didn't write this to be strictly romantic fiction. It just seemed to fit there above all the other categories when I posted it here. I ...

Areida, I know exactly what you mean about Odysseus. I didn't like him at all. I thought his character was tricky and decietful. My favorite is Achilles. I think his ...

Mmm hmmm. Elves, rings that have to power to destroy all that's good in the world, Dark Lords, wizards with staffs that light up in the dark, ect. I think ...

hmmm nor do I.

Very disturbing but attention holding I couldn't help reading on even though my skin was crawling. Nice job.

I really liked this. It would be an AWESOME opening to a movie.

I'm sorry but can you explain to me how it goes against your religion?

Thanks again I'll try that.

I agree that it needs more emotion. It seems to be just a list of facts and clever wording. This didn't keep my attention at all. I suggest throwing in ...

Thanks. I'll be putting more of my work up soon. I can't exactly get the format right in the forum though. The tabs are off.