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Thanks for the review, Star! Just wanted to point out that you slipped into past tense there *screams internally* Around the time I was working on this, I was writing ...

Thanks for the review and happy new year, Vil! I think this chapter has been longer than the others, which is awesome! If future chapters are going to be longer, ...

Thanks for the review, Icy! It can sometimes be daunting for people to review a work that's on chapter seven already so maybe in your future chapters, you could consider ...

Hello, welcome back and thanks for the review! It's great to hear from you again! :D You can totally share characters%u2019 thoughts with your reader even if you%u2019re writing in ...

Thanks for the review! At one point you say "The Mad in Black," where I am assuming you mean "Man" and not "Mad." Thanks. Fixed it!! :D

Hey, thanks for the review! I would give a word of caution for being too whiplash-y between having lots and lots of actions, compared to heavy amounts of description I've ...

Thanks for the review, Vilinius! I really think that present tense isn't really improving your story the way past tense would. Would you think about revising in past tense? What ...

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Thanks for reading the chapters, and also the review!

very interesting tags there lol

Thank you, MoonIris!

Thanks for the review, Buranko! Glad you liked it. However this is a cleverly put together poem( it would surprise me if you said that this is a poem made ...

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You're welcome! :D

Thanks, Star! Glad you enjoyed it. :)