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Re: [deleted]
Hello :) I did find it disturbing to a certain extent. I've read a few of these kind of stories. I liked the thoughts Helen had, It did creep me ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: A Love Lost
Since everyone seems to have pointed out the mistakes I could find, There's one thing I'd like to say: Blonde hair, blue eyes, B-cup; hell, she was everything a man ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: Confessions of a Lovestruck Girl - true story.
I really find these kind of stories very touching, And yet, I seemed to have sealed my hormones in an empty baked beans can and chucked it somewhere obscure. Because ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: In an Instant
Sweet plot. There really are things like love at first sight. Archer has a rather cute reaction, Running in the opposite direction of her next class just to stalk a ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: How I Feel When I Play The Piano
I totally get what you mean. I love playing the piano. Correct me if I'm wrong, but cacophony means a mixture of unplesant and loud sounds? Right, I forgot. There's ...
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: Hopeless
Woah, cool! Our all mighty Administrator has descended down from the heavens to give you a review. *I blame Conrad Rice for the expression :D* I can really feel the ...
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: a poem (warning, this piece has a lot of adult language)
O_o See the thing is, even if you put a warning, A lot of 13-16 year olds will still read this. The human psychology. They tell you don't read this, ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Lion Hunting
Gah, I cried at the end. So touching! I was practically jumping around in happiness when she met Caspian again. It was longer than I expected, But I love the ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: A Stupid Plan
sweet. Was kind of disappointed that it ended so fast. I thought the girl would be more disappointed than happy in the end, Because he came and went so fast, ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Welcoming Freedom Chapter 8
I'm going to assume, Bella's personality here is much different from that of the book? Some parts seemed to progress a bit fast, And at times, Carlisle & Esme don't ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Hey Babycakes
Love the plot. Its the kind that made me Suck in my breath and widen my eyes kind of thing. I liked the 'crazy stalker ex-girlfriend' thing. I was really ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Two
My face just turned green. Not because I'm sick, but because I'm jealous, Envious. You really have this ability to write in a Dreamy, realistic(okay, a contradiction to dreamy) fashion. ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Scorpius Malfoy/Rose Weasley
There was nothing about Malfoy, but there will be...right? You've caught my attention. She seems kinda close to Albus. But cousins can't...you know. Keep me updated on your story. Gosh, ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: Paper Faces On Parade
Uhhh..I'm confused ._. Sorry, I'm not very bright. The narrator is Prince Caspian, right? Then what's with the Howard? And Susan's reaction at the end? Or is it someone else? ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: Unexpecter love. Chapter 4
WOAH. Jake and Leah. Leah and Jake. What has this world come to?! Their intense dislike for each other sure changed to love(?) at record speed. They seem to be ...
Dec 24, 2008
