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:D I'm so happy you love the ending.

Ah, that makes a lot more sense!

Lol at your confusion about Cinder. xD He's a Shade, a creature I made up that's... similar to a large (panther-size) cat, but with more of a dog-shaped head, and ...

Thanks for the review! I didn't say "the funeral" at the beginning because I was hoping to leave it unclear where she was going at first. With Tel, he just ...

I'm really glad you like this chapter. :D It's probably one of my favorites in the book. And Yeah, looking back I should really mention Cinder at least once or ...

Hm, yeah, centering it around one person does make sense, especially since Ayda would be emotional enough to not notice other's reactions as much. I'll definitely think about that.

Yeah, I have everything broken up correctly in Scrivener, but copy/paste deletes the spaces. (I'm super glad you like the second scene as that's a new addition.) I'm definitely going ...

It's fine, it happens. xD And I'll pass on being tagged for now, but I might dip in and out of this as I'm looking for things to review.

Hm, I'll have to decide if Ayda's overconfidence (and thus being mildly annoying is intentional) - I think it fits her character really well, but I might need to tone ...

Okay, this was really helpful. 2. but if I've read all this right, Ayda already had her magic back when she flies into the Well successfully the first time in ...

You jumped in at the climax of the novel, but thanks for the review. xD

Sometimes it seems almost like Evota is a former name for Nadra that you forgot to edit out No, this is exactly what it is. Crap, I thought I'd caught ...

Okay, I swear I did not get a notification for this review. I'm glad I finally saw it. xD

Thanks as always! To clarify, that statement was a hypothetical - that's what Ayda knew Nadra was about to do, not what she had actually done. So Madeline's magic isn't ...

And thank you for the explanation! That makes a lot more sense.