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Re: build me a house
Thanks for the review! I think your dislike of the last stanza comes from having taken a rather different interpretation of the poem then what I had in mind when ...
Apr 1, 2018 - Re: build me a house Apr 1, 2018
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Re: Dropping: Ch. 1 (2,500 words)
Ah, yeah, I catch that now - I must not have realized that's who they were talking to. xD Glad I could help!
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: Outsiders- Chapter 1
Haha don't worry about it, it's definitely a learning curve. %uD83D%uDE00
Mar 21, 2018 -
Re: Outsiders- Chapter 1
Hey! I happened to see this and thought I'd let you know - the [code][/code.] code is usually used to post templates that includes BBcode, without the coding actually taking ...
Mar 21, 2018 -
Re: Elemental [1]
Ahhh, a jump in time as well. Cool! Do know that what are usually called "bullet trains" are the ones that go like 300 miles/hour and aren't really used for ...
Mar 20, 2018 -
Re: Outsiders-Othero
No problem! I'll definitely try to get to it today or tomorrow. :D
Mar 18, 2018 -
Re: The Bible Isn't Moral Part 1 (Slavery)
I'm glad the review was helpful! Sure, I have my objections to the New Testament as well and I can explain them. However, I think dismissing the Old Testament because ...
Mar 18, 2018 -
Re: Back to the Beginning Chapter 1
Ah, that makes a lot more sense! If you could put a quick explanation like that into the story itself, I think you'd be good.
Mar 17, 2018 -
Re: The Last Hope~ Chapter Two
I'll be sure to review them tomorrow, then! :D
Mar 17, 2018 -
Re: Clockwork
Thanks for the review! I like your interpretation. :D
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Brotherly
Than you for the review! "Dulcet" is supposed to be sarcastic, but I'll definitely keep an eye out for that sort of thing.
Feb 18, 2018 -
Re: Brotherly
(Just realized I forgot to reply to you lol.) Thanks for the feedback! I think my exposition could definitely use some tweaking since people basically either figured it out really ...
Feb 18, 2018 -
Re: Brotherly
Thanks for the feedback! I was trying to say that Lily only recently moved to the home nearby, since foster children get moved around a lot, but yeah looking back ...
Feb 17, 2018 -
Re: Brotherly
Thank you! :)
Feb 17, 2018
