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Re: FALL - Chapter Two - Burdened
Hey there! I'm here for a review. I like that your "villain" and your hero know each other. It makes things more personal and is good for conflict. So, first ...
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Forgotten Fire, Chapter 9 - Scout
Hey there! I'm back for another review. Also, I just went through and read the rest of your chapters, and I'm still really enjoying this. So, again, I like this. ...
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: Forgotten Fire, Chapter 8 - Burn
Hey there! So, I really like this - it was well-written, I could tell what was going on, and the descriptions and dialogue were good. All right, so, this is ...
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: To Think I Used To Be Your Savior
Hey there! I liked this, and I'm getting tired of reviewing novel chapters, so I thought I'd review this. You get the dubious honor of being my 250th review, by ...
Feb 14, 2016 -
Re: Fortissimo: Chapter Three (slice 2)
Hey there! Here for a quick review. So, yay for band geeks and all that! I'll confess that I'm more of an orchestra kid, but band is fun too. This ...
Feb 14, 2016 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 19
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review, and I apologize I haven't read any of the previous parts. Regardless, I still enjoyed this - I could follow what was ...
Feb 14, 2016 -
Re: Belinda Cabbotry: Alter Number Three (PART 22)
Hey there! I'm back again. So, I thought this was a good continuation from the last part overall. The main thing I'll say about it is that it was a ...
Feb 13, 2016 -
Re: Belinda Cabbotry: Alter Number Three (PART 21)
Hey there. Sorry I haven't read previous parts. In general, I enjoyed this. It was a bit disturbing, but well-written. In particular, I thought a sense of character came through ...
Feb 13, 2016 -
Re: DUET :Chapter 11:
Hey there! I'm back. So, I liked this chapter too. Again, it was a bit long, but for me it was paced better and easier to read through. Clearly, some ...
Feb 12, 2016 -
Re: DUET :Chapter 10:
Hey there! Let's jump right into this. Unfortunately, I haven't read the rest of the parts to this, so I apologize in advance if I say something that would be ...
Feb 12, 2016 -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Nine
Hey there! I'm back! I'll get straight into it. So, again, this is a good chapter. I think it's great that we're seeing Sadie's point of view, and I think ...
Feb 11, 2016 -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Eight
Hey there! Let's get straight into the review. So, this is a solid chapter. I apologize up front for not having read any of the previous chapters, but surprisingly, I ...
Feb 10, 2016 -
Re: -deleted-
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review for you. So, first off, this is actually quite good. I like your style of narration - you have a pretty good ...
Feb 10, 2016 -
Re: My Life in a Bizarre Town: Chapter 2
Hey there! I'm here for a review on this. So, I think the idea you have here is pretty interesting. My favorite thing about it is that the existence of ...
Feb 10, 2016 -
Re: Ascent Chapter 4
Hey there! I'm back again. Let's get straight to it. Remember how I said that your last chapter was just a bit on the long side? Yeah, this one's really ...
Feb 9, 2016
