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Re: Untitled Novel : [Chapter 6 : Tell Me]
Hey there, I'm back again for another review! This part was also pretty good. I like the tone of this chapter overall. It all kind of feels comfortably slow-paced, like ...
Mar 26, 2016 -
Re: How We Made The World Just A Little Bit Nicer - Rylie, Episode 7
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. I think you have some pretty interesting ideas. I like your characters especially - they really come to life for ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: Typo Alley~L Part Two
Hey there! I'm not sure I have time to review this as thoroughly as Rydia has done already, but I'll give it my best shot. And I apologize in advance ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.03)
Hey, guess what, I'm back for another review! So, again, this part was really good. (Definitely better than what I was cranking out for LMS. xD) I really like your ...
Mar 24, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 5, The Name Game
Hey there! I saw this lurking at the back of the Green Room and thought I'd come review it. So, this definitely shows promise. I like your main two characters ...
Mar 24, 2016 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 23): Disrespect Your Elders
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. I apologize in advance if this winds up not being overly helpful because I haven't read previous parts. Overall, this was quite ...
Mar 23, 2016 -
Re: Beyond -- Chapter 5
Hey there! I noticed this in the back of the Green Room and I thought I'd come give it a quick review. I apologize in advance for not having read ...
Mar 23, 2016 -
Re: Beyond -- Chapter 6
Hey there! I saw this lurking at the back of the Green Room and thought I'd come review it. And...just wow. To be honest, this is a really good chapter. ...
Mar 22, 2016 -
Re: Merry Christmas To Me (Near To You - Chapter 6)
Hey there! I thought I'd come back for yet another review on this final chapter you have posted here. I'm kind of sad to see you've stopped posting it - ...
Mar 21, 2016 -
Re: Let The Countdown Begin (Near To You - Chapter 5)
Hey there! Guess what, I'm back again. So... this chapter felt odd. I guess I can kind of understand the need for a timeskip at some point in the story ...
Mar 21, 2016 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 29
Hey hey, I saw this lurking here and I thought I'd come review it for you. So, unfortunately, this piece suffers from one problem: It's too good! At least, from ...
Mar 21, 2016 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Nine - Not so Great Expectations
Hey there, fellow previously-LMSer! (That's a mouthful. xD) I'd thought I'd drop by and review this, since it's at the back of the Green Room. Now, I'm going to be ...
Mar 20, 2016 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 23
Hey there! I'm back again, since this one has also wound up at the back of the Green Room. Let's get straight into it, then! So, I feel I'm at ...
Mar 20, 2016 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 8.3]
Hey! I'm back. Sorry this one's taken a while to come. So, another good chapter overall. Let's get straight into it. I actually liked the explanation that she seemed fragile, ...
Mar 19, 2016 -
Re: Fanfiction- chapter 4
Hey, you didn't tag me for this one! Anyway, on to the review. So I love this, as you very well know. I'll spare you my ramblings of praise, though. ...
Mar 19, 2016