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Hey Sonder! I'm back again. :) I'm really glad Eli's getting properly treated. I really love Emma's reaction to his being hurt and the conflict we see from her. I ...

Hey Sonder! Finally getting around to reviewing this part now, haha. Celeste isn't my favorite viewpoint, but I don't really mind her. I think what keeps her as a bit ...

...I know you think this chapter is a mess, but really I beg to differ because I loved it. Also hi! I'm here! I'm not dead! I just needed a ...

Hi Light! I'm super sorry it's taken me so long to review this. I kinda needed a break after RevMo, and then life things have been kicking my butt for ...

CLIFFHANGER WHY. NOT FAIR. Okay, on to the actual review. xD I'm tired right now, so sorry if it's slightly incoherent. This was definitely an interesting chapter. We're still in ...

I love magic system explanations! And this one is really interesting. Definitely not boring. My favorite thing is the conditions bit - now I'm really wondering what the conditions were ...

Hey Sophie! I saw you mentioned on your wall that this is due tomorrow, so I thought I'd drop by and review it for you! Honestly, I think you're in ...

Hey there, ArtofSilence! I'm here for one really quick final review on this lovely Review Day! Niteowl's review was super thorough, but we'll see if I have anything to add. ...

Hey there Bisc! I'm here for a super quick review on this lovely Review Day, so let's get to it and I'll see what I can give you having jumped ...

Hey there, scribble! I'm here for a super quick review on this lovely Review Day! I've read one or two previous parts to this, but I"m not exactly caught up, ...

Okay, time to get back to this story! And now I'm reading the actual version, haha. I really like how you show Zita's panic at the beginning and how much ...

Hey there! I thought I'd come back today for a quick review, because it's Review Day! Also, I'm kinda tired/hungry, so sorry if I'm less coherent than normal - just ...

This'll be my last one for you today, so let's make it a good one. Harry did it! I'm glad she finally did. I've actually been pretty invested in their ...

All right, let's dive into it. My comments on the last chapter about having the mind-reading affect the conversation aren't revoked for that chapter, but they clearly did have an ...

Alright, I'm back again and I'm very hungry but can't go get food for a couple hours so yeah sorry if my coherency suffers. I don't like Glenn that much, ...