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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 29.1
I love this chapter! I adore the hotel and the way you describe it is so evocative (though maybe could be sprinkled a bit throughout more? Right now it feels ...
Apr 22, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 28.1
And I'm back! I really love the detail of Edna scrubbing frantically and fruitlessly at the dragon blood on her clothes and on Beatrice. Her fixation on it says so ...
Apr 22, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 27
All right, so these reviews are going to be a bit different from my normal reviews because they'll be commenting on the story as a whole so far as well ...
Apr 21, 2018 -
Re: The Face
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this fine Review Day. I like the way you describer Caroline's second sight and are careful to not ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: it's complicated
Right, so I have absolutely no idea how to review this but I guess I will be because that's what you posted in the thread. :P So this is beautiful. ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Dropping: Ch. 1 (2,500 words)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely Review Day. Overall, this is honestly really good, mostly because of your character's voice. Your main character ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Every INDIAN 00'S KID Will Relate To:
Hey there Ishan! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this Review Day. I'm not Indian, but I am a 00's kid, so we'll see how much ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: The Infection: New World (Chapter 2-3)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by with a quick review on this lovely Review Day. First chapter The description of his physical changes was done well and generally disturbing ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Why me
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this lovely Review Day. I'll echo Lareine in recommending that you break this up into groups of 2-3 ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Alibi
Hey Evander! Thought I'd drop by with a quick review on this fine Review Day, since I need a short story for a checklist challenge. This is a good story. ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 10 Part 1 (First Draft)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this lovely review day! I think I reviewed a chapter of this a long time ago, but I ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Sister Brookes (TV Horror Series) Episode 1 "Angels"
Hey there scaredycat! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this lovely review day! Scripts are definitely a rarity on here, but I always enjoy reading them ...
Mar 24, 2018 -
Re: I Will Return: Chapter 3.3
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this lovely Review Day. I remember reviewing the last chapter of this a while ago, so I'll keep ...
Mar 24, 2018 -
Re: A Heart
Hey, Ano! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this lovely Review Day! I really like this! I think it definitely feels like the lyrics to a ...
Mar 24, 2018 -
Re: An Essay on the Spanish-American War
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this today, and I'll see if I can add anything to BlueAfrica's excellent one. xD The first thing ...
Mar 24, 2018