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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Heart is in the Future

    Hello there. I hope to give a good review. I feel that much of the concept is delivered by the title only, but at the same time you have presented ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: The Beginning - Prologue and Chapter 1

    Hello there. Hope to give a true review. To say whether the story has a great plot or not it would be very early, so I will just tell about ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: I before E!

    Hello there. Hope I can be of help. It was an entertaining poem, although the several words at last breaks the flow, because those words have no rhythm, but not ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It Makes Her Beautiful

    Hello there. I will try to review as good as I can. As already said by others this poem has a really good overall meaning—our body characters which are different ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Just a small poem

    Hey there. Hope I will be as true as I can be. I really like the starting line, and the repetition of the words 'I watch', it made me think ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: literary love

    Hello there. Posting a review as true as I can be. Its short and up to the point. I believe such romantic poems are good if they are short, and ...

    Jan 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: she was redheaded.

    Hello. I am doing a simple review. I liked as you stick to the title of the poem most of the time, and to say, those red hair really worked ...

    Jan 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Politics, Culture Re: What do we tell the children?

    Hello. Trying to give a fair review. I really liked the concept of the poem. Although at first it looked to be not on the topic, it came to point ...

    Jan 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tomorrow's dream

    Hello. Doing my first review. I will try to be as much true, but I am myself not a mature writer. Yeah, as others said, the poem is too optimistic. ...

    Jan 23, 2017


The only way of knowing a person is to love them without hope.
— Walter Benjamin