MckieC

This is stunningly good. The beginning word choice is flawless, and your grammar is almost perfect. However, in the last sentence, of your third paragraph you used "their" when you ...

Hello! You could really tell that there was genuine emotion behind this poem, and that it actually meant something to you. Your use for words was pretty fantastic in some ...

Hiya! This is a pretty great start, and it's very intriguing. The very beginning is quite unique in the sense that you don't instantly start explaining things, you jump right ...