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Re: The Vanity of the Rose (Chapter One- To Be Named Later)
It's very well written though at points i was going into rambling. It's very descriptive which i like and it makes her feelings very apparent, giving a strong sense of ...
Feb 9, 2012 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Jaws of Chaos
Thanks for the heads up. I did think that but i thought the sentences would be waay to short, but i'll give it a go xx
Feb 9, 2012 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Jaws of Chaos
Cheers, i'm a bit crap when it comes to grammmmmer :) x And i'll post the next bit tonight xx
Feb 9, 2012 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Jaws of Chaos
Cheers, i'll just change it now :) xx
Feb 8, 2012 -
Re: The Forgotten Memory [Chapter 1]
Don't give up, this is really good for a 14 year old, you can only get better. I've only just started and i'm 16, don't just give up on it ...
Feb 8, 2012