Mazey

Hey! So, you asked if I could come and review a poem of yours, and here I am! I'll be honest... I love writing poetry, but when it comes to ...

Hey! I haven't reviewed in a long while, so this might not be that constructive, but I'm gonna try my hardest! I don't like to nitpick grammar, so I'm not ...

Heh - to say the least, this poem made me laugh. In a good way! Of course, in a good way! It was a silly poem, but with it being ...

I liked this poem :) I get the imagery (and liked it), you used strong words, and kept the stanzas' beats relatively in check with the rest of the poem. ...

(P.S. - yes, before I even say anything, I must have this P.S. - I'm so so so so so so so so sorry I didn't read this earlier, as ...

Just wanted to say that I liked the edit :) The song was interesting and different. I liked it. I also liked the fact that Ben didn't die in this ...

I love how that a garden, out of all the things in the world, is what causes a group of grown men to become uneasy. It's different and is very ...

Ooooh, a hunt. And not any ordinary hunt... a magical hunt. Those are always fun :D So, since it's a prologue, I can't really critique it like I would for ...

Alright, as much as I want to make this as positive as possible... I'm not going to lie... This chapter seemed a little rushed. I mean, I get what's going ...

AHH! This is great! Such a twist, I never expected it! Oh my goodness! I love your description :) The way you twist it in between the action is splendid, ...

Oooh, this is getting tight! You have a wonderful way of putting the setting in front of the readers. There's a flow about your writing that is absolutely perfect. It's ...

Hey, Aero! I'm Mazey :) So, first off... no ond, and I mean no. one. can have enough onomatopoeia! It's such a rarely used thing (for lack of a better ...

Hey there! Do you mind if I call you Drac, instead of DraconiaxLesoto? So, I liked the prologue. There was an air of mystery, and you wrote it well. There ...

Hello, waitingfor life :) Soo... I thought that you started the chapter off really well. It's was sort of like "Oh, he's relaxed in a chair", and then - BAM! ...

I especially loved the opening. It was different, it was unique. May I commend you on your amazing ability to create such dramatic scenes in such a short and quickly ...