Maybury

I like it, it's simple, bouncey and fun, all can be very good things. :) Also anything that praises books, always good and will automatically interest me. I like the ...

I like this, it's simple and has a humour about itself. true some of the rhyme is obviously forced but it isn't that bad. I also like how you've taken ...

I love the style that you have, it has the ability to draw a reader in through intruige and interest. this piece is very emotional and I appreciate the vivid ...

even with the spelling mistakes, you have still proved that you have listened to the critiques you have been given and have used them to form yet another passionate piece. ...

another amazing story Lily. you can definatly can write so that the passion is evident to the reader in every sentence. As previously stated by the above, the multi-angle narritive ...