MaybeAndrew

I poured my heart and soul into it. I'm glad you appreciate it.

*bows* thank you thank you

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun with it, XD. Its actually based on a world idea I have that I am considering for a novel. Anyway, ...

Thank you for the review! I agree it is kinda like dune, probably because dune was inspired by the same moby dick Esq legends and stories that inspire this story.

Thank you so much for the review chi! I understand what you're saying about the too many descriptions thing, this was inspired by Moby Dick, the most descriptive heavy - ...

Thank you so much for the review! With it being a little overwhelming -that is also a fear of mine, but it is also slightly intentional. I hope to build ...

Thank you so much Icy! I agree there are some tense problems with that paragraph, and I'll be sure to edit that. And I'm glad you like the question!

Thank you so much for the review icy! I'll be sure to edit those points!

Thank you so much for your review! I will be sure to focus more on how Liam feels than physical descriptions

Thank you so much! You're right, I probably should have added a part three XD. I'll be sure to make those edits! And I'm glad you're picking up on the ...

Thank you so much for the review! I get what your saying about the too many names for the stallion thing, and I'll be sure to edit that!

Thank you so much for the review malice! I agree that I should share more of Liam's thoughts, I'll be sure to edit that!

Thank you sooo much for the review Mailice! My first thought was that this was Irish or Gaelic.... I am a sucker for Ireland (:

Thank you so much! I'm happy that you like the argument, it took a ton of fine-tuning and drafts to get it to a place where I think it makes ...

Thank you so much for the review! You%u2019re correct on the religious beats. A lot of this book is inspired by various mythologies, but mostly heavily the dying king narrative ...