MaybeAndrew

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Those critiques on what was boring were really helpful, thanks! Andrew

Thank you so much for you're review Vague Fairiee!

Thank you so much for the review! Partly I prefer the first half where he explains all this to him with the stones, because he seemed a bit different in ...

Oh yeah, I forgot to add the question XD. I should probably do that.

Thank you so much for the review! I'll be sure to edit all of those points

Thank you so much for the review! I have no idea how this review snuck past me! Especially because it's amazing! But I somehow never saw it.

Hey! Thank you so much for your review! Your personal experience with grief is very helpful, so thank you for sharing that.

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you like these quieter moments! I was unsure about them.

Thank you so much for you're review Snoink! I agree all those sections are really rushed, tbh I feel this first chapter is the most umm, messy of all of ...

Thaaaank you so much for you're review Snoink! I agree the flashback with Liam doesn't fit well, I should probably move that to the opening of a later chapter. Once ...

Thank you so much for reading it. I'm glad my art was able to help you. It is quite possibly, the greatest thing ever made, if I do say so ...

Thank you. I am glad you appreciate it, I put my whole heart and soul into it.

Thank you so much for your review. You are the second person who said I should add some dialogue in for Rebecca, so I guess I'll go ahead and do ...

Thank you so much for your review!

Thaaankkkss so much for the review! I agree about the dialogue bits, I'll be sure to edit those!